The descriptions of math and mathematicians do not ring true to me. They sound like the ideas of an author of fiction who has limited experience with either. For example, Aaron's need to think of numbers in terms of beans (as in grade school) and his friend the math professor's similar need to "tether" the abstractions by hanging numbers written on crepe paper from his office ceiling seem interesting, but unlike anything I have seen or heard from a real mathematician. The professors "jokes" also do not sound like anything a real mathematician would say.

But, realism is probably not what McFawn was aiming for in this story in which the constant presence of butterflies adds a sense of something eerie and supernatural. In fact, it is a very beautifully written story. It is easy to see why McFawn would be the winner of a Flannery O'Connor Award.

First published in Confrontation Magazine Issue 112, the story was more reprinted in McFawn's collection "Bright Shards of Someplace Else".